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ANALYSIS REPORTFictional sample05.07.2026

The effect of bariatric surgery in comparison with the control group on the prevention of comorbidities in people with severe obesity: a prospective cohort study

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Key Points

  • 1Prospective dual-cohort study from Iran comparing incident T2DM, hypertension, and dyslipidaemia in bariatric surgery (n=612) versus obese controls (n=593) over three years; impressive risk reductions, but non-randomised allocation and baseline metabolic imbalance between cohorts limit causal attribution.

Major Issues

Methods: The surgery and control cohorts originate from different source populations with fundamentally different recruitment strategies (clinic-volunteers vs. community-sampled), introducing systematic selection bias and confounding by indication that cannot be fully controlled by statistical methods alone.
Methods / Statistics: No propensity score matching, inverse probability weighting, or multivariable regression is used to adjust for baseline differences between groups; relative risk reductions are unadjusted despite acknowledged baseline metabolic imbalance.
Results: Per-procedure subgroup outcomes (SG vs. OAGB vs. RYGB) are reported only for T2DM, not for hypertension or dyslipidaemia; this selective reporting may bias interpretation of procedure-specific effects.
Methods: Loss to follow-up rate and missing data handling strategy are not reported; in a 3-year prospective study of severely obese patients, attrition can be substantial and its pattern (informative vs. random) affects result validity.

Priority Action Plan

HIGH IMPACT

Problem

Implement IPTW or propensity score matching to control for baseline metabolic differences between the TOTS (surgery) and TLGS (control) cohorts.

Why it matters

Without adjustment, the comparison conflates the effect of surgery with systematic differences in baseline health and motivation between two distinct source populations.

Suggested fix

Implement IPTW or propensity score matching to control for baseline metabolic differences between the TOTS (surgery) and TLGS (control) cohorts.

HIGH IMPACT

Problem

Report loss-to-follow-up rates and conduct tipping-point sensitivity analysis for missing outcome data.

Why it matters

In a 3-year follow-up of severely obese patients, differential attrition could bias both groups' outcome estimates and is a standard reviewer expectation.

Suggested fix

Report loss-to-follow-up rates and conduct tipping-point sensitivity analysis for missing outcome data.

MEDIUM IMPACT

Problem

Add NNT and absolute risk difference alongside relative risk reductions; extend per-procedure analyses to all three outcomes.

Why it matters

Relative risks are susceptible to misleading interpretation when baseline rates differ; absolute measures and per-procedure data are needed for clinical implementation guidance.

Suggested fix

Add NNT and absolute risk difference alongside relative risk reductions; extend per-procedure analyses to all three outcomes.

Quick win: The study fills an important regional gap in bariatric surgery evidence. Strengthen the analysis with propensity-adjusted comparisons, complete attrition reporting, and absolute risk metrics. These are achievable with the existing data and would substantially improve the manuscript's credibility for high-impact surgical journals.

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